Hirak Photography

[hirak]

Hi people first time posting my pics for critque in this section. There are a few pics that you have seen in some other threads.

All comments or brick-bats are welcome to help improve myself

Batch1: These are clicked with Canon 1000d 18-55 non-IS kit lens

 

[paddy1428]

Hirak ji Very beatuifull pics.. lemon in water or Soda was awosam.........

 

[hirak]

Hirak ji Very beatuifull pics.. lemon in water or Soda was awosam.........

thanks paddy, will be posting a few more

 

[hacket]

Good start. 18-55 is better off with landscape and portraits few snaps on these.
Lemonade splash might require faster shutter speed and 4th pic the subject is out of focus or did you set the focus on the leaf on the top and to right?

 

[hirak]

Good start. 18-55 is better off with landscape and portraits few snaps on these.
Lemonade splash might require faster shutter speed and 4th pic the subject is out of focus or did you set the focus on the leaf on the top and to right?

The focus point was on the flower with the bee, i know the background flowers should have been a little more blurred.

 

[hirak]

Batch 2: Abstract Pics of non-living things. Pics taken with 1000d with 55-250 lens borrowed

 

[hacket]

Not the bee one, the 4th snap.Just with leaves/ferns (or whatever its called as)

Moon shot is too good.Any post processing done apart from resizing?

 

[hirak]

Not the bee one, the 4th snap.Just with leaves/ferns (or whatever its called as)

Moon shot is too good.Any post processing done apart from resizing?

Yeah the 4th the focus was on the green leaves on the center. I didnt spend much time in the shot later i realized.

Moon pic: crop & sharpness by 2 points. apart from that nothing else.

 

[pulsarider]

lemonade and moon are stunning !

 

[hirak]

lemonade and moon are stunning !

Thanks for those words. still trying to improve upon composition and focussing.