Before commenting, let me clarify that i am not at all a good photographer and also i am not in a position to technically analyze a photo and comment on it.
I am just posting what i felt from the first view of the pic.
I am not able to get what you are trying to show in the above photo, whether you are emphasizing on the lady with the mountains in background or you are emphasizing on the mountains because neither the details of the lady are clear nor the background is sharp.
To me, image is appearing very dull (dull, in the sense, with low light). It might be due to the clouds hovering above.
Composition wise, i think the image would be more better with the lady a little more on the side of the frame and turning a little bit to show the side of the face ( not full side portion, a little bit of skin part might also do )
Also, you could have moved a little back to capture the lady in full or almost full to give the effect of the depth of the valley.
I may be right, i may be wrong i just posted what i felt. Don't take it seriously, some great photographers are here on the forum to comment on it.